For #AtoZ Challenge:
Why you left me all alone??
Left me for the other one
See what you have done to me
You turned and left
Leaving me with broken walls of dreams and memories
Your sweet memories…
Once, I was full of life and energy
Gleaming with your love
And standing strong beneath the shining sun
Giving you warmth, care and love of home
Entrusting your laughter and sorrows
Helping you to rest well
And see beautiful dreams
But, when your dreams fulfilled
You left me behind…
Left me alone, shatter and broken
But still I have a hope
Hope, that one day you will be back
Searching for your old memories.
Welcome back Ma’m
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Hey dear!!! Thank you however, call me Nimmi… Just Nimmi 😊
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I thought you said Call me 😀
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No… Never 😊
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So will you just Abandon me ? 😦
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Oh! No dear. You are my sweet friend 😊
Hope you like this concept poetry.
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But you just did !
Yes it’s nice poetry as always showcasing the strong n kind feelings you have.
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Don’t say it dear!
Aw!! That’s so sweet of you dear! Thank you 😊
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Are you speak Litotes or Figure Of Speech because I cannot understand you with so much of “dearness”, I might get diabetic ?
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Ha ha ha 😂 cool 😉👍
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Oh by the way there are so many posts where your opinion would matter a lot, I am waiting forward to see when you can share your thoughts.
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Hmmmm… Can you elaborate?? I didn’t get what you want me to do… 😜
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You haven’t commented on any of my post 😦
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Oops….!! I just did. ;P
Sorry dear for not being able to be around much!
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Nostalgia through inanimate. Good one.
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Aw!!! I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you so much dear!! 😊💕
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Reblogged this on An Array Of Blogs.
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Thank you for the reblog Cheryl!! Appreciated. 😊
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Beautiful poem
The house as a person
Great idea
As always Sheldon
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Glad you liked it. I wanted to right on this concept for long glad I penned it now.
Thank you dear for your lovely encouraging words!! 😊💕
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that phase is over i believe. isnt it?
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Dear… Here I’m not talking about any phase or any thing.. Just trying to give words to an abandoned house!
Hope you liked it… 😊
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Nice start Cheryl (smile) Blessings!!
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Thank you, dear! 😊
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Just out of curiousity, why you always write about love??
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Oh!! I too don’t know dear… I’m just trying to write all about feelings… Different kinds of feelings. 😊
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Ohh! I like how you express your feelings
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Thanks dear! 🙂
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lovely lines
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Glad you liked it. Thank you, dear! 😊
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Very well expressed. Abandoning leads to being alone:(
This time am doing themed poetry,check me out
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Yeah! At the end it leads to being alone.
Here, I just try to give words to an abandoned house.
Oh, that sounds great! I love to see dear! Send me the link. 😊
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Thank you dear!! 😊
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This was me sometime ago. You took me down memory lane Nimmi. Beautiful piece.
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Aw!!! I don’t know what to say… Just try to give a words to an abandoned house.
Glad you liked it and connect with it. Thank you, dear! 😊
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Such a deep sad poem. Kind of reminds me of Toy Story 2.
You have been minioned by Sheena-kay Graham
Proud Minion of the Joy Brigade
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Thank you, dear! Glad you liked it and find a connection! 🙂
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[…] life seems to Abandon you When your friends Betray […]
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Thank you!! 😊
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