The park….

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Do you remember that park
Where we have once met
I still have that memories mark
It was a shinning sunny day
So was my heart
I was so excited and happy
And you looked so smart
I just wanted time to stop
Talking and laughing at your joke
Is making my heart drop
Today the park was still there
And that bench too
Enjoying many love pair
But my heart is missing you.

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54 thoughts on “The park….

    • You said it… And sometime that place just tear you apart and bring back all those memories which you have tried to bury it.
      Thank you for your lovely words my dear.. I mean it!! ❀ πŸ™‚

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  1. I wasn’t talking about the pain
    As much as the pleasure
    I can always find the pain
    It’s those beautiful memories
    Of hand holding hand
    When love was small
    And my heart was little
    That’s what I want to remember
    As always Sheldon

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    • Yes, it’s ended a year back…almost a year… And now the junk is left out which I started to clean up…
      Thank you so much for liking it 😊 Your words means a lot to me… you know that πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–

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  2. This is simply beautiful my friend. It is extremely hard to forget some people and their memories but you have to keep moving because life existed before that somebody came and I am sure you are trying your best to build a life without that somebody. Take care and stay strong.

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    • I understand your words and I’m trying to fly high above that memorise too. ..
      I’m so glad you liked it! Thank you soo much my dear friend for you encouraging and lovely words πŸ’–πŸ˜Š

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  3. Pretty straightforward poetry like a commentary. Theme and symbolic depiction of the park and the bench is pretty banal yet good. The metaphors, the abstract thoughts are missing. I read your one of the poems ‘wounded heart’ or something…that was pretty much in sync with poetic beauty. This one is good, but you can surely do much better.

    Ha! Sometimes I go overboard. Keep writing. Ignore the critics.

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    • Oh!! I love critics πŸ˜‰ No… Seriously, I loved your comment and the way you have shown me some technical errors to work on. So, I’ll look at it and learn it and not repeat it in the future.
      However, you know I just want to keep it simple and to the point this time… Cause, sometimes deep feelings can choke you and you left speechless.
      Oh! You must be speaking about ‘Wounds will heal‘.. Glad to know that it passed the critics mark ;P
      Thank you so much for liking it and giving me an insight about this and I hope to get such critics’ points for my coming works too πŸ™‚

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