Previously, you made my dreams beautiful
Beautiful with your presence
You Played with me, talked with me
You spend lots of time with me
Now, those dreams turn into nightmares
The thought haunts me, scares me
You left me with cold sweat and breathless
Now I’m shattered in different pieces
Handed over to different people
But no one willing to take me as a whole
Like a beautiful pearl necklace
Broken and shattered on the ground
Can’t get back to the original round
What we identified with the most wonderful feelings become the most hurting knife once the subject for those feelings are memories of the past. I understand this. For example songs we loved to listen because they fit those feelings are a torture when they are played surprisingly.Big hugs Nimmi!
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You are so right, dear! Once wonderful and sweet feelings changes or hurt the most when things won’t work out… You understand me so well and I said this many times ❤
Thank you dear for understanding and feeling my pain! Much love and hug to you ❤
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We simply experience quite the same feelings when even through different situations. I am thankful for having all those experiences, because I understand others better. ❤
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Indeed, dear!! and I’m learning from these experiences… Really, life is a great teacher! 🙂
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A very profound one 😉
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😉 ❤
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It is shattering when we our love is shattered Nimmi. Its a beautiful poem.
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Glad you liked it, Sir!! Thank you so much… ❤
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You are welcome Nimmi.
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💖😊
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Sometimes you just need to let the person go away, If he is yours he will come back and if he is not yours its good that he has gone
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You are right, dear!! You know I let him go already… However, those memories are haunting me… I’m hoping for the best. Thank you, dear! ❤
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Its just that the more you think about that the more it will haunt you.
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Yeah! You are right… 💖
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Hi Nimmi, thanks for following my blog. I hope this finds to you well. Your poT is very sad and I understand. Sometimes we break to get fixed aright after. I feel things are close though. It’s painful and there are so many excuses for damning the situation and needing to move on, though it comes back around and maybe eventually we can be together enough to enjoy what we have painstakingly created.
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I already told you dear that, you have a great blog and I already loved your work. 🙂
I’m so glad you connect with my feelings and Thank you so much for liking my poetry’s 🙂 You are so sweet, Ashley! ❤
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Nimmi, this is so true and so lovely. With each test, we learn a bit more, face a bit more, suffer a bit more and die a bit more. May be lose one or two beads of the once-so-ever-beautiful necklace.
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Aw!! Your words are so true, Darshith!! Life teaches us in many way through many test.. In that course of action we may lose some beads or get/find a gem or two too 😉
Hain na… 🙂 Thank you dear for your lovely comments 🙂
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Yes Nimmi, you got it right 🙂 I just talked about some beads losing. I never thought of finding a gem or two in the process. You are always welcome 🙂
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That is life is all about dear:) ❤
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Dreams may end. Life goes on. So do you.
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Welcome back dear!! Glad to see your comments 🙂
Indeed!! You are so true.. Dreams die however, life goes on… ❤
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Broken I may be, lost I am not.
You were the blessing in disguise,
The disguise you stripped open
Snatching the solace that held me together.
Broken I may be, lost I am not
Lessons, you left behind, make me stronger
Each broken piece that I collect,
I find myself, a part of the dream.
Broken I may be, lost I am not
For like a phoenix,
I will rise from the ashes
That you left behind
PS : Don’t kill me. I am just trying to bring the sunny side up. I apologize if I over stepped.
PPS : Great post – poem. Too deep. Too emotional (sort of). Nostalgic. And the blatant truth. A reality which whispers and stays so close we never see it coming.
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Oh, wow!! It’s beautiful… Why to kill you? 😛 This is perfectly complimenting my poem and no need for the apologies 🙂
Thank you so much dear for connecting and feeling my feelings 🙂 ❤
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Because it was contradictory, sort of ( to yours) I mean in a way. No?
Oh, great. Glad you feel that way. 😀
The pleasure is all mine. 🙂
Keep writing, keep inspiring. 😀
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Yes! That’s what I want to say 🙂 Likewise dear 🙂
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Oh, great. 😀
Thank you. 🙂
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Lol!! 😀 Welcome 😛
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hehe. 😀
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You pick up those pearls and string them again
I know the pain of bending down
But you can do it Nimmi
Broken love can be whole again
Let your passion be the string
Much love
Sheldon
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Aw! You are so kind and I Appritiate your kind and encouraging words.
Much love to you, dear! 💖
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Heartbreaking reality for so many in this life. Sometimes, broken is all we have to offer, but sometimes, it is all that’s needed to be healed.
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Indeed! Thank you so much dear for your true and kind words.
Love to you 💕
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Reblogged this on cwa115's Blog.
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Thank you so much for the reblogged, dear! 😊 💖
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May not get back to original, but sure can turn to something more beautiful.. 🙂 A very deep one..
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Hmmm… You are right, dear!! Don’t know about something more beautiful, however, hoping for the best 😉
Thank you so much PH!! 🙂
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Hope will get you there.. 🙂
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Thank you, dear! 🙂 Ye batao… How you doin’ ??
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Going on so far good. 🙂 Amidst the life of hectic and busy and lazy and everything else..
Hope all good at your end!
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Oh! Glad to know that 🙂 Life is all this 😉 I’m also going with the same effects of life 😛
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May be that’s what makes life beautiful and fruitful one day.. To look back and be amazed of what went behind… 🙂
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Indeed!! 🙂 ❤
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Sometimes life is such..
No one gets the whole world .. you get some you lose some.. that is how the world is.. but we tend to keep the sadness more than the happiness ..
Take care
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Indeed!! No one get the perfect world…. Thank you so much dear for your true words! 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Aw! Thank you, dear! 🙂
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The poem speaks so many things all at once. Thanks for sharing dear. 🙂
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I’m so glad you liked it! Thanks to you dear… ❤ 🙂
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READ YOUR FEELINGS category birdie, can see a broken love side of you, and how you says your feeling into a poetic form..
Broken shattered pearls will mend again
keep a hope,
as someone will come to make things right,
and make your dreams beautiful again 🙂
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Yes, dear… This birdie is having a broken heart. And, her feelings mostly come out in a poetic form.
However, she is glad you loved her work.
Aw! That so sweet of you to say, Mansi!! Love to you ❤ 🙂
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I wish Birdie will write more of her feelings in poetic form and during her poetry process she will soon mend her heart too …love to u too ❤ will love reading more of your feelings as they are something i could feel connected with… 😀
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I too hope the same dear… Thank you so much 🙂 ❤
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🙂
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Hard as it is, sometimes what we want isn’t best or possible.
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I hear you. I don’t know about the best however, sometimes it’s not possible…
Thank you, dear! ❤ 🙂
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Phenomenally written, ‘…no one willing to take me as a whole….’, the best part to me …keep writing 🙂
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I’m so glad you noticed and liked it… You mad me happy 🙂 Thank you, dear!! ❤ 🙂
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yea every poet have their fav phase in a poem and readers their ….that was mine…….well its a pleasure 🙂
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Yeah, that’s true. Thanks a million for that 🙂
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🙂
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It’s like breaking a mirror in a hundred pieces and seeing your reflection in each one.
At times your are alone in one and also in one hundred
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True!! Thank you so much for giving such true and beautiful summary to my words. ❤
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Lovely.
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Thank you so much for liking my work! 🙂
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Welcome.
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