April A to Z Blogging….. For me O for Optimistic….
I’m broken, shattered and in pain
Taking two steps forward
And three steps back in vain
You push me hard on the ground
Left me there in my wound
I’ll crawl, bend and will stand
Cause strangers are giving me a helping hand
I know I’m still alone
In this world, still unknown
Some says let go of these feelings
But when night falls my hearts start bleeding
I wish I can erase my pain
And get healed by the rain
I have been called crazy and lazy
But trying to live like a daisy
I’ll swim in this dead sea
Cause I’m still strong you see
I can still see the stars
And will win this war
I’ll go with the light of the mystic
Cause the kindness from strangers keeps me optimistic
Thank you for this lovely word too 🙂 And I’m dedicating it to all my lovely friends out here, including you… Yes, YOU 🙂
Soul mate's - so near, yet so far 
This poem is a master piece, Nimmi. It states very clear how things are. But there is no hiding, no breaking apart anymore – as if you would observe yourself. It is just a clear statement and at the same time it radiates this growing enormous strength of moving on, of getting strong right because of this experience. I cannot tell you how much I find myself in it. Great Nimmi!!!
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Ah!! I’m so glad you liked it and connect with it… This is what my current feelings are… However, it fluctuates…Just hoping for the best.
Thank you, dear 🙂 ❤
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Yes, that’s what I clearly felt from you. Feels wonderful to me!!!
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Aww!! Thanks a million my dear!! 🙂 Love to you ❤
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😊 Thank you, Nimmi!!!
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God will heal your heart – in time.
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Thank you, Mam!! 🙂
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This poem is so soothing — really liked it.
-Naima
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Aw!! Glad to hear that, Naima 🙂 Thank you so much dear 🙂 ❤
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Yeah me ! Thanks I hope I am a nice friend by now nims and you need to know that it was a hit 🙂
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Yes you are, Izza!! Much love to you and Thank you so much dear 🙂 ❤
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YAYEEE 🙂
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Thanks for the dedication 🙂 Lovely poem!
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You are always welcome!! And thank you so much, Anoop 🙂
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Keep swimming, and we’ll swim right behind. One way or another you’ll reach the shore.
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No you all are swimming beside me… And together we’ll reach the shore… A beautiful shore 🙂
Love to you ❤ 🙂
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Sounds lovely. 🙂
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🙂
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Its too deep! brings out the strength of pain! too good!
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Ah!! Thank you for feeling it…. 🙂
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🙂 It was a pleasure read.. 🙂
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Aw!! Glad to hear that 🙂
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Optimism in it’s best coutre 🙂 Loved it! Nimmi your poems always manage to make me smile and ponder 🙂
*hugs*
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Aw!! Thank you, darling 🙂
Big hug and love coming your way too 🙂 ❤
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😀
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Lovely. This kind of poems are my favourites, so rhyming. Appreciating the effort you took and your poetic skills in this one. Btw You are paddling really hard to keep yourself afloat!! Be strong 🙂
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Aw!! First of all, welcome to my little world 😉
I’m so glad you liked my work and thanks a million for feeling my feelings 🙂 Thank you, Jithin!! 🙂
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Welcome?! Didn’t I already come to your world? Anyway you are welcome 🙂
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No, you came, however, this one is your first comment and I guess your first genuine visit too 😛
Spare me if I’m wrong 😉
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I don’t think its my first comment. Same applies to genuine visit too. 😛
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Really?? Then my mistake.. apologies 😉
And I do visit.. Cause I love your photography okay 🙂 No comments 😛
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Thank you for your visits. I didn’t want to be an a..h..e by not visiting your blog just by giving an excuse that I am busy. I like your poem though its sad.
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What do you mean by a..h..e???
I know, my feelings are mostly sad however, glad to know that you liked it 🙂 Thank you 🙂
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a..hole 😛
sad mostly?? 😛 I guess that made you a poet. 😉 You’re welcome
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I’m also worried, that I’m becoming a poet 😛
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glad you didn’t become an alcoholic instead 😛
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Hahaha… If I will be in your shoes then would have been one ;P 😉
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now explan that ^^ 😛
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What to explain?? 😛
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is my shoes that bad?? 😛
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Haha 😀 I mean If I will be or rather you will be in my place then will definitely tried 😉 😛
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hmm.. but that doesn’t help the situation, even writing wont help. Only let go will help
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Well, I don’t know about the previous one however, writing is a process of letting go…At least for me…
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you thing so, I guess. But you’re just holding on to it indirectly. Well I can be wrong.
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I guess you are right too… I don’t know yaar, these feelings will take time to heal…
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I know, but time will heal everything. Its all impermanent. Maybe one day you will even make this blog private 😉
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Now you are scaring me real hard 😛 😉
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why? am I reading your mind? 😛
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No 😉 However, your words are making me think… You are right, give the time some time and hope for the best… 🙂
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Think and be better soon 😀
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Yeap 🙂 Thank you 🙂
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After all we are in the o for optimism post 😀 So You’re welcome
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Oh, yes!! 😀
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🙂
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